I thought this was pretty good. I liked the animation and story. The character style is very cute and fun, but the music could definitely be improved. If you're thinking about removing the music, some simple sound effect replacements could really improve the next video.
All in all, this was well done. Story looks like it's off to a good start. I wish this was longer though. This looks like the beginning of a cartoon series. Keep at it, and I hope to see more from you in the future.
This was entertaining and really well executed. The voice acting could definitely be improved. The voice acting sounded rather shy and withdrawn to me. But otherwise, good job and keep at it.
Thanks very much!
I appreciate the feedback! :)
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